My current school writing project
Jun 5, 2009 Writing Projects
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Jasper
Our teacher assigned an end of year writing project. I was released from school early, so I could spend more time with my mom in Michigan. Everyone has to do this narrative project, so I’m working on it here. This story is called “Adventures of a gnome family”.
Once upon a time there was a nice couple name Mr. and Mrs. Lanky. They had a normal life and a normal height for a gnome, and a kid named Paul. Paul was a average kidwith average height, but he was a little chubby. One day he was walking in a field and was bit by an unknown creature. He went running home. He yelled “Mommy, mommy, I got bit by something and it hurts!” Ok, let me see, sad Mrs. Lanky. She came over, looked and fainted. When Mr. Lanky came home, there was a big puddle of blood on the floor. “Mom fainted!” said Paul. “Well first, we need to get you to the hospital, right away!” said Paul’s dad. Next thing you know, they were in the hospital and Paul was being treated. “I’ll go get your mother.” said Mr. Lanky.
While he was doing that, Paul fell asleep and had a strange dream… He suddenly woke up in a hospital and yelled. Mr. and Mrs. Lanky came rushing over. “How did I get here?” “Remember?” said Mrs. Lanky. “You were seriously injured in the field, and you came home crying.” “Oh yeah,” said Paul. “Yes, now go back to sleep you need to rest”, said both parents. When Paul woke again, he was looking at the doctor. “Will I be alright?” said Paul. I’m afraid not, said the doctor. “For at least two days you will be alright, but then the pain will come and you will die!” “But can we stop it?” said Paul. “Yes” said the doctor. “There is only one medicine that will cure you, but there’s only one thing…we don’t have it.” “Do you know who has the cure?” asked Paul. Yes, said the doctor. You need to go straight through the forest to Gnoamalocks, they have the cure. By the way, it takes one day and one night. “Do my parents know about this?” “Yes, they said it’s up to you, said the doctor.” “Well, I don’t want to die, I’ll make the trip.” said Paul.
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